| As internet spreads, 'Plagiarism' get easier than ever. People don't even notice they've done is plagiarism. Intellectual property right is a legal which refers to creations of the mind for which exclusive rights are recognized. Under intellectual property law, owners are granted certain exclusive rights to a variety of intangible assets, such as musical, literary, and artistic works; discoveries and inventions; and words, phrases, symbols, and designs. Common types of intellectual property rights include copyright, trademarks, patents, industrial design rights, trade dress, and in some jurisdictions trade secrets. That is the right for one's own creation. The point is that even now it's not that easy to create this essay. The creation is so precious that it should be appropriately pretected. The law should be more strick in order to guarantee one's creation. And also people should recognize the importance of the creaton works that we enjoy respecting them at a reasonable price. |
Saturday, May 4, 2013
200904071 Jaemin park/ first draft
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I think that it was helpful to understand the background of the essay by describing the definition of "intellectual property"
ReplyDeleteOn the other hand, i think it will be better structure if you add a counter-argument part.
Thank you:)
To Jaemin from Minah Lee
ReplyDelete1. Does the essay have five paragraphs? No. I think this is rather a brainstorming than a first draft of the essay.
2. Does the essay have a thesis statement that identifies the writer's point of view? I think this part; The creation is so precious that it should be appropriately pretected is the thesis statement.
3. Do the body paragraphs include topic sentences that support the writer's position? No. There should be five paragraphs first.
4. Does the third body paragraph contain a counter-argument with either a refutation or a concession? I don't think so.
5. Do the details in the body paragraphs support reasons stated in the topic sentences? They don't. Not that I know of.
6. Does the conclusion restate the thesis statement in a different words, make a prediction, or state the issue in a broader context? It lacks of the whole idea.
200904071 Jaemin park/ second draft
ReplyDeleteAs internet spreads, people can search, get and share information easilier than ever, which makes it possible to access others' creation as well.
Since it's natural to get information from internet, people don't even notice they've done is plagiarism.
Plagiarism is the practice of using or copying someone else's idea or work and pretending that you thought of it or created it.
Under intellectual property law, owners are granted certain exclusive rights to a variety of intangible assets, such as musical, literary, and artistic works; discoveries and inventions; and words, phrases, symbols, and designs.
Common types of intellectual property rights include copyright, trademarks, patents, industrial design rights, trade dress, and in some jurisdictions trade secrets.
People infringe the right for one's own creation without a penny.
Just like it's not that easy to create this essay, it requires enormous exertion to create something.
Whatever the creation would be, even though it's really small thing , we should pay for it as it's not yours.
Any work has a real owner so it should be appropriately paied and the right be pretected.
For this, the law should be more strick in order to guarantee one's creation.And most of all, people should recognize the importance of the creaton works that they enjoy, respecting them at a reasonable price.